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Thor pushed back his red cape over his shoulder, sighing silently. He traced his finger along side of the wall. How long since he has he been gone? He could hardly remember, it still broke this man emotionally. He shook his head silently, his feet clapping silently against the ground. He always hopes his dear brother would just appear or surprise him or something.

Nothing, days passes, nothing, no sign of him, no hint, no hope that he is hiding somewhere. He finally just sat down onto the abandon part of the halls that anyone barely walks. He closed his eyes, lifting head up trying to not to break into tears. It was eminent that he is about to collapse.

The voice, he didn't want to open his eyes. "Brother?" The young voice said. He swallows. He didn't answer. "Please talk to me, I am here, look." The voice sounded like Loki. He opened his eyes, seeing a transparent figure of his brother, teen probably close to adulthood. "Loki..?" He said with a frown. He felt something cold on his hand that was resting on the ground. He looks down, swallowing.

"Yes. I am alive." Loki said with a smile on his face like he missed Thor dearly and very much. Thor felt tears down his face. He reached his hand forward, trying to grab him though went right through him. "No..Your just a figment of my imagination. If only…you were actually here." He said closing his eyes. He leaned against the wall.

His throat hurts, how long has he been sitting here? An hour? More? He has no clue, he felt himself choke up. He lift his hand up only feel his wrist grabbed. "Noo…" He whispers thinking it's just another of his imagination. He tries to pull his hand away but felt the grip tight and keep him from moving away. "Thor, such foolish brother. Everyone is looking for you." The familiar, sounds so real, so alive, only pushed him into more tears as he went to collapsed onto his side but he was caught. "Why…" He whispered with pain in his voice.

Loki looks down at his brother, has he done to much damage to him to cause this? For leaving for so long? He has no idea. "Come on, big brute, open your eyes." His voice demanded him, though he kept his voice a little soft. Small guilt hovering over his shoulder.

Thor shudders before opening his eyes, looking up to see Loki staring down at him with his brilliant green colored eyes. He wasn't transparent either. "Loki?" He said out his name as if this was a dream.

"Yes it's me, just go to sleep." He said before lifting his hand, glowing green softly as brushed his pale fingers over his blonde hair brother's eyes. Thor frowns and groans in protest though he ends up falling asleep against Loki's arm.

Loki sighed, unsure what to do now, leaving again would likely drive Thor into something damaging. He picked up him, jeeze need to stop eating or at least lose some of the muscle. He carried him to his room, since it was closest one by. He opens the door with magic, placing him down onto the bed. He took the sheets and places it over him.

Loki grabbed a chair and sat down near the bed, guess he has to fix his mistake he has caused and put his brother back together.
I don't know the original picture for the literature thing. Though made a fanfic based off of the pic. Tis so sad! ;A;

EDIT: I might make a part two for this, unsure! Please do comment if want to a part two for this.

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Leonardogirl4eve Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015
Oh my gosh that was really good ^^
you should make a parr]t two
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AnimalLover10300 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student General Artist
PLZ MAKE MORE!
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I am not sure. Maybe. 
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AnimalLover10300 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Student General Artist
please :iconplease-plz:
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Possibly but I have been busy. 
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AnimalLover10300 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Student General Artist
true dat
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SeniorPotato Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
WANT PART 2 NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :iconcannotevenplz:
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
O.O
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Loki-RebelGod Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
(AWWWWW!!!!)
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Yes. XD Thank you.
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Loki-RebelGod Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
Np
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theperfectbromance Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh my god! Lovely! ;-;
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! ^^ I might make a part two for this. Unsure, still debating. XD
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theperfectbromance Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
do, please do!
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I'll see what I can do. Cx
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superpopcorn101 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So sad but I love it!!!
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! And I know, all from a picture that given me inspiration.
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KitkatRevolution Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
dem feels...
-teartear- </3~
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Yesh.
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SeniorPotato Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
*crash,boom,splat........... u hear that?......those were my feels...

:iconbravoplz: love this it was awesome
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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Koemi-chan Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Beautiful ; n ;
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you.
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SakeVanHelsing Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student General Artist
OMG! so touching ;-; Tell me there's more!
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Possibly in the future.
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SakeVanHelsing Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student General Artist
PLEASE<3 x3
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I said possibly, I do have school and I have writers block frequently.
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SakeVanHelsing Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student General Artist
awww, well i hope yer inspiration comes back~
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
It comes and goes. Though definately be making more Fanfic depending what in the mood for.
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SakeVanHelsing Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Student General Artist
yay K-ool c:
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StealingBabiesBRB Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
:'( This is beautiful! :'(
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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StealingBabiesBRB Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
I really like it. :meow: Are you planning to write anything more?
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Like another chapter? Not sure yet. Writer's block is a pain, but I might. So just stay tune then.
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StealingBabiesBRB Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Writer's Block is a pain for sure. :disbelief: I meant any short stories about anyone else from the Thor-universe; not just Loki. :P But I can wait. :)
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Ah, I am not going at playing out Thor. I hope he is in character. I mostly Loki fan, but the picture inspired and made into Thor point of view this time. I have a bunch of stories under my literature folder.
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StealingBabiesBRB Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
I will definitely check out some of your other stuff then. :nod: Thor is very easy to keep in character so you did great. :nod:
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AStolenRelic Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!
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